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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Overall, the lighting is fairly well done in this. The overhead lighting is a bit harsh, but overhead lighting can be very harsh, especially within this type of setting.

You might add more visual contrast by placing an emitter sphere outside of the scene behind the back wall so it would appear that the "yard light" nearby shone through the barred windows. It would highlight the figures a bit more and help her outfit not blend into the back wall as much.

The skin tones are well done as well as the spec settings, however the male's lips are a tad too pink-I haven't been in Reality lately but I wonder if you added a contrast color to the SSS Settings that it would tone the man's lips back a bit.

Poses are well thought out, composition is as well.

Over all, well done.